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M88youngling: Created page with "Following someone's public attempt to change the clan photo file name on the page, I realize that this page will need to be brought up to a higher standard and will need some ..."

2018-01-09T21:53:55Z

Created page with "Following someone's public attempt to change the clan photo file name on the page, I realize that this page will need to be brought up to a higher standard and will need some ..."

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Following someone's public attempt to change the clan photo file name on the page, I realize that this page will need to be brought up to a higher standard and will need some more information as well. I've added a caption clarifying that the provided logo is from the Harrysboo247's version of the Dark Akatsuki and may not necessarily have been the same logo used when Bzrew45 was in power. Another glaring issue of this page I see is that I need to reevaluate the rather strong language used. A sentence like ''"<span style="font-size:14px;font-weight:400;">Being a clan fueled by roleplay, the members of the clan fell in line under his autocratic rule without question" </span>''<span style="font-weight:400;">Is a very strong statement that contains bits of bias from the Union's perspective thanks to its wordiness. It should be cut down to reduce wordiness and replaced with something more citable and factual to allow the reader to make their own judgement about how autocratic the clan was. I can definitely attest to people in Bzrew's influence being unwaveringly loyal in what appeared to be fear. The reason for this always went unexplained and the best we could ever attribute it to was to Bz's silly roleplay that fueled the entire clan. </span>