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Thread:M88youngling/@comment-3185063-20180613194734/@comment-1775276-20180613203117

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The removed paragraph.

"The High Authority and the LittleBigPlanet Union are considered neutral..."

Considered neutral by whom? Also, the present tense suggests that the Union government continues to exist, which it does not. The only ones who care about current LBP clanning anymore in our discord server are involved with you. You could perhaps change this to past tense, but I don't really remember us ever agreeing to neutrality. 

"...following the [High Authority's] predecessor having plotted against the latter."

With the previous statement removed, this is irrelevent to the High Authority. Simply stating that the High Authority is the successor to the Evurikal Legion provides this information if one was to click the link to check out the Evurikal Legion page. 

"Despite this, both groups' leaders are on good terms."

There is no leader of the Union, so this is incorrect. Again, past tense could work but I don't see any evidence that Eryk (was president for six months until the government was dissolved around the beginning of May) was friendly or accepting of the high authority.

If you can cite a neutrality agreement, perhaps in a discord conversation I forgot or one between you and Eryk that I didn't know about, and then make it past tense that's okay.

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On a separate note, while I'm here typing away instead of doing my homework, I'm concerned about the High Authority. I think you've really missed the point and this is partially our fault for not giving context to the Condemn LBP-_-Savior campaign. Yes, it was intended to gain a little bit more momentum with people who disliked Savior. There was never any intention to use it to use Savior for entertainment by trolling him. It appears to me that you're just following in the footsteps of dozens of clans before you that made LBP hate clanning. This #BurnAxisDown business isn't very productive, and I can only assume that it's been fueled by the very questionable people you have involved with your team, like Ribbium. The team you've assembled does not seem like it has the best interests of the community in mind, and just wants to troll and bully people for entertainment. In my perspective, this makes the High Authority much worse than anything Savior could do with the Axis. It's especially concerning when you encourage children to join in on this (Boogerface). 

Why waste time verbally attacking people who don't contribute productive content when you could work to create better content yourself as a team? Counterpoint if you want, I've got homework to do.